Dandelions

In the flower fields,

That's where I'll go.

How long I'll be there,

I don't know.

I put a dandelion against my lips,

And blow it a sweet gentle kiss.

As the seeds float away to a world that no one knows..

Reviews

[Soul Fire]

Beautiful write, and I read an second one this week of it, I see Dandelions are pretty inspiring dried out flowers, as a child I loved them, symbolic, and great to blow all the seeds into the field... and make a final wish... (superstition)

Thank you for sharing this.

E.L.

[Soul Fire]

Thank you for your review,
I love dandelions too.

You're very welcome :) they are precious!

[cevance]

Perfection! The simplicity of this piece is grand beauty itself. I wish I had penned this one myself.

[Soul Fire]

Thank you :D

[Tai Ryens]

Not too sure if you intended for a metaphor or not, but here goes my interpretation: looking through a player's eyes, he/she lifts up the heart of another; blows away the protection, and watches as fragments of his/her lover's heart go . . . Only to drop them and search for another.

[Soul Fire]

Didn't mean for a metaphor.But I like the one you found in it!