Vanished

Vanished

A Poem by Soul Fire

She was there,but now she's gone.
Her presence is forever unknown.
''Where is she?'' Her mother groans.

She is hidden,hidden in space.
Her place is not known.
The search team is on race.

Where did she go?
Where could she be?
She just vanished.

The search party is blind on her location.
They looked back and forth,without hesitation.
Where is the search station?

The Search party is lost.
''Where is our location?'' Her mother cries.
No one has found them or the little girl.
All that is left of them is corpses on the floor.

© 2012 Soul Fire


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Sad poem. Great expression.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

thank you :D
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She is hidden,hidden in space.
Her place is not known.
The search team is on race.
My favorite part! 100/100 :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you :D Glad you liked it! That's one of my favourites too!
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12 Years Ago

:D
...! That is awsome!!!!!!! good poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you
Chilling! I love dark poetry like this, very creative and well written!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you :D
EMMIE

12 Years Ago

Np

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 Soul Fire
Soul Fire

Little Dreams, Dreamland, Canada



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