Snowmen

Snowmen

A Story by Soul Fire

'' Do not touch Mr.Fuzzle puff!!!!!'' My Mother screamed with great anger and fury as I put down her precious Mr.Fuzzle puff,a snowman from her giant snowman collection.''Psycho.''I mumbled under my breathe.''What did you say, Vicki?'' She hissed. ``Nothing.'' I growled. I walked back to my room, cursing at my crazy snowmen collecting Psycho Mother.Everywhere I looked there was a snowman looking at me with it's tiny plastic eyes. It was so creepy living with Mom.
''It's not even winter time,It's the middle of August'' I remembered saying that from an argument Mom and I had last summer.Our arguements were so pointless and useless...Almost as useless as I feel.I looked down at my shoe,noticing some sticky gum stuck to my shoe.''Ew.'' I said,absolutely disgusted. I looked up only to find my half brother,Gabe playing with his gum and laughing at my shoe situation.
  ''Nice work,sis!'' He laughed.I scowled at him.'' Chill, Blair.I'm only joking.'' He said stepping away from me,almost tripping.He knew not to mess with me,especially today.
Today was the anniversary of the worst possible event,well events imaginable.Today is the anniversary of the day ''it'' happened.

© 2012 Soul Fire


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 Soul Fire
What do you think?It's just an idea for characters in a possible new story/book.Reviews appreciated :D

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Sky
I would say this is more of a character sketch than a story. We get a good idea about who the teenaged girl (I'm assuming teen, 12-14?), and the tension she has with her mother. For character building, this is good. It feels incomplete for a story. Flash fiction, although very short, still has all of the basic elements of a story.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you for your review :)



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I thinnk it is pretty cool 100/100. Keep writing more

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The snowman collection makes it interesting and odd, and makes me want to read more. Go for it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thanks
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Sky
I would say this is more of a character sketch than a story. We get a good idea about who the teenaged girl (I'm assuming teen, 12-14?), and the tension she has with her mother. For character building, this is good. It feels incomplete for a story. Flash fiction, although very short, still has all of the basic elements of a story.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you for your review :)
The mom seems obsessed with odd things &
the girl seems like a curious teenager
Interesting characters

Posted 12 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thanks for the re-view .Re-read it,please.I added to it :D
Broken Soul

12 Years Ago

The boy seems like a mischevious ten-12 year old im guessing

I cant wait for you to rev.. read more
 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you :D

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 Soul Fire
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