Jenga

A poem about current events in my life....Enjoy.

You stack bullshit up on me like a Jenja pile,

Hoping that I won't wiggle and fall.

Hoping that I can keep up and stay up for a while.

But in reality,I'm weak and wobbling but still stand tall and strong.

Inside,I am about to ball

I am really,really sick of it,

I have enough on my plate as it really is.

But you keep stacking on top of my tower.

Waiting for me to crumble,waiting for me to fall.

You say you are my father,but what kind of father would do this at all?

Let's rate her suffering from 1-10.

Not enough?

Let's stack more on her all over again!

This must be a game to you.

A game you like to play.

'Cause once I am weak enough,your bullshit doesn't go away.

It stays and stacks some more on my plate.

Daddy,What happened to you?

Reality to you must be really late?

Daddy,I am nearly 15,and  I have my surgery soon?

While pile up my plate,

We don't even have a surgery date.

Why do you want a divorce so soon?

Daddy,I know you need money,

and want to have a hot honey.

But what happened to you?

You are selling our house,

You creepy mouse.

You don't even live here.

What gives you a right to sell my house away?

Daddy,after surgery where will I stay?

Since you want so badly to take my house away.

Daddy,what happened to the man I thought that I had known?

When we went on vacation,

You went and got a loan.

You went to the real estate place,

Got a broker and a lady with a pretty face.

You asked them to appraise MY home.

You don't even live here!!

We're not even grown!

How dare you try to sell,my one and only home!

You betrayed us!

What happened to you?

You left us,and now your selling the only house I've lived in.

You are selling my home!

How dare you do this?

I should have known!

Daddy,you are a liar!

You backstabber!

What happened to you?

I don't even know you anymore!

You do not belong here!

You left us and shut the door!

You have no right!

You have no right!

You have no right to sell our home! 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. Hard when a parent fall apart. Hard for old people to walk a straight line and be good. I understand the important of a home. Good to have a place to feel safe. Strong emotions and statements in the poem. I hope things for okay for you. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Soul Fire]

Thank you for the review :D

[Steven Cash]

Sorry this happened.

[Soul Fire]

It's currently happening actually.....&thank you

[Steven Cash]

Aw, sorry, that makes it even worse

[Soul Fire]

Yeah...MSG me?

[Steven Cash]

sure, gimmie 30secs

[BasketballGirl13]

I really liked how as this poem went on the emotion got stronger and stronger. I hope all works out for you!

[Soul Fire]

Thank you :)

[Westminster Abbey]

Wow.

[Soul Fire]

I know

[_]

Wow, that was probably the worst poems I've ever read. THE TOPIC! I MEAN...the events to occur to someone. It must be heart wrenching to experience it all and to top it off with more hard circumstances. Wow.

[Soul Fire]

Yes it's horrible

[Nicole]

first off, let me say that i am so so sorry. it's not fair at all :( as a literary critic, it's very well constructed, has good tempo, and is very powerful. as a person, it's the saddest thing i've encountered, and i am so so sorry that this would happen to you.

[Soul Fire]

Yeah.... It's horrible....