A Stary Night

A description of loneliness even when you are not alone...

Wishing upon a silver star shooting across the sky;

Hoping to meet ''the one'' before I die and I join the stars up there,

I really hope he knows that I'm right here.

I look up at the beautifully stary night.

While knowing the man who's holding me isn't ''Mr.Right.''

I sigh,as I stare up at the black night.

I really just want to be up there,

with no one to bother me,

It seems safe up there,rather than here.

I wonder if the one is looking up right now,

Will he come soon?

I really hope so...

I hope he's alright.

Goodnight,Goodnight My love,

I hope that you are alright.

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

That true love, mr/mrs right u can tell and feel it...
same for me, I would miss her at all times, happy and sad....

terrific poem :)

[DarknessPeering]

Funny how that works isn't it? You can be in a crowd of people and still be so terribly alone. I enjoyed the visuals you provide and feeling of hope even through the loneliness.

[Steven Cash]

Why are your quotations spaced like that?

But oh, it's a good story. Don't get me wrong

[Soul Fire]

Because my laptop is old and weird.And thank you.

[Steven Cash]

HA lol

ok no prob

[Soul Fire]

fixed it. aaha

[Steven Cash]

great!