Fall,Drown,Sink,Spin

Falling, I'm falling, I'm falling below.

Sinking,Sinking,I'm sinking,so slow.

Spinning,Spinning,I'm spinning,like a ballerina.

Do not leave me,

Watch me dance,

Do not leave me behind,

You are in a trance.

I'm sinking below,

looking up at the sunshine that I had left behind,

I guess summer sunshine was never meant to be mine.

Please don't forget me.

One day I'll go.

I love you,I hope that you know.

I'm falling down,

I've fallen before,

Fallen and boulders have hit me on my way down.

But now I am climbing the mountain,

until next time,

I fall down.

Reviews

[That1Nerd23]

Great poem, I love the repetition!

[Soul Fire]

thanks for your review!

[That1Nerd23]

You're welcome!

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But now I am climbing the mountain,
until next time,
I fall down.
(What really happened to me first time I went hiking) Great poetry! I loved the last part! 100/100

[Soul Fire]

That's my favourite part too! Thank you For your review.I hope your okay!

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Yeah, I am ok and you're welcome