The Way You Make Me Feel

A very emotional poem

The way you make me feel, 

Oh how hard it is to deal. 

With the pain you make me feel, 

You feed me your lies like a meal. 

You make me squeal!, 

The pain,it overwhelms me, 

Why won`t you tell me?, 

About all the lies you told me?. 

How dare you hurt me?, 

It stings,it burns,it kills, inside. 

The pain piereces my skin, 

Its a needle, 

Don't let it go in.

Reviews

[Steven Cash]

Forgive me sounding like and idiot, but that's it about?

[Soul Fire]

It's about a friendship relationship & dating relationship both abusive in there own way,and this is my explaintion of how they made me feel.

[Steven Cash]

Oh, gotcha. It was great.

[Soul Fire]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good description in the poem. Led readers to statements leading them into a bad situation.
"How dare you hurt me?,
It stings,it burns,it kills, inside. "
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Soul Fire]

Thank you for the review.I'm glad you enjoyed it