Hello Friend

Hello Friend,

You are welcome to review,

Just comment over here.

Otherwise shoo!

Enjoying the read?

I'm glad.

Keep reading.

You'll be glad that you had.

I hope you have a good day,

But please don't go away.

At least,not yet anyway.

Remember to focus on today,

and not tomorrow.

Thoughts are the key to happiness or sorrow.

Make a choice,

Make it fast.

Because reality is just a cast over our eyes.

Surprise yourself with your Imagination.

Because that will always last.

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Hahaha! I loved how this started off with a sense of humor then ended in all serious mode. That's a way to catch a reader's attention. Well, you sure caught mine anyways. I like the message you brought out to the audience towards the end, where it says "Remember to focus on today, and not tomorrow." I think that's a great way to think about life! We don't really know if we're promised another day here so might as well enjoy what you have now and the moments you're living. To answer your question(Enjoying the read?) I sure did, matter of fact! Keep up the good work and post more poems such as this one :D

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Soul Fire]

Thank you so much!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're very welcome!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice and positive poem. Best compliment to a writer. To be read and understood. Thank you for your thoughts.
Coyote

[Soul Fire]

Thank you for your review

[C.A. Lucas]

so unique! this sounds like something i would write! great work :)

[Soul Fire]

thank you very much