Hideaway

Hideaway

A Poem by Soul Fire

I walked into the garden on a Sunday,
I live by the water,
Where you can see the children play.
Relax,
Hear the ocean.
It's okay.
Don't walk away,it's okay,it's okay.
Life's precious moments await you.
Do not walk away from the possibility of a great one.
Welcome to hide away.
It's free you do not need to pay,
Relax.
Stay.

© 2012 Soul Fire


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coool

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

thanks
Beautiful description took me to a good place. Nice to have a location where you can hear the ocean and walk near the sea. Create peace for the mind and the heart. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

thank you
VERY nice. Reminds me of a song, actually.

Posted 12 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I really loved this one, its kinda soothing.. I can imagine someone speaking this in a soft tone.. I think you've done a great job with this one!


Posted 12 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Aehr

12 Years Ago

you're welcome

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Added on August 23, 2012
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 Soul Fire
Soul Fire

Little Dreams, Dreamland, Canada



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Hello, I'm Raya. I love music,writing and singing.I'm always writing or creating something.I really enjoy singing and writing my own music.I write stories,poems and books.I have a large variety of.. more..

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A Poem by Soul Fire