Disaster

This song story is inspired by my experiences,emotions and occurances during my relationship with my severely biploar exboyfriend.

Disaster

You are the earth,

I am the ocean 

When we collided

We created havoc at its best

We go over and over and over and over and over again.

We’re sinking and sinking, then falling and falling. I feel like I’m drowning.

Below.

You’re the ocean,

I’m the Red Sea,

You are the powers that parted me,

You’re the Tsunami,

Not me.

We’re spinning and falling, now the earth is crashing and bashing, and people are screaming and screaming, and running and running.

You’re a hurricane.

I’m your winds.

You wrap me around,

Into your clutch.

I guess you never cared much.

We’re sinking then falling, now I’m drowning below.

Oh here we go.

You say you love me, then you starve me of air, you hurt me, and beat me. How do I survive this crazy b***h of a storm. You pull me under, and drown me, and drown me, starve me of air, until there’s no hope for ‘morrow and I can see you staring and laughing at my struggling below.

You drown me, some more. Now I no longer see hope.

How will I cope.

You’re the devil’s son. I hope you know.

Copywright of SMB ©

Reviews

[C.A. Lucas]

I also see that you have know reviews on this poem, either. Maybe it's a glitch or something. Anyway, I love it! Totally describes a bipolar boyfriend. I'm sorry this happened to you, I suppose it happens to everybody at least once. I always say that the most gorgeous poems and stories can be produced from the most grim and depressing times. Thank you for sharing :)

[Soul Fire]

Thank you for being the first to review once again! so glad you enjoyed it! :D

[C.A. Lucas]

My pleasure again :)

[Soul Fire]

:)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

this is sad but yet good song.
i'm sorry.
hope you guys are friends and been there done that.
If you need to talk me and everyone are here for you.

[MOON]

Poignant write , from great pain sometimes comes great strength . May you grow in strength.