my hell

my hell

A Poem by RayXor

my eager lies of forgotten betrayal slice at my heart but i don't even care the pain is just pain the scares are not there i might once forget but till then I'm in hell a hell of my own that i did create a hell with no love a hell of pure hate forgotten or remembered to me its the same because i know the truth and they think the same

© 2014 RayXor


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At first I was what's with the structure. But after I read it I felt deep pain and regret. I like that there's no punctuations. In a time of pain and suffering nothing is done in order or properly. The structure of this piece helps with imagery at least it does for me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

RayXor

10 Years Ago

thank you!



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At first I was what's with the structure. But after I read it I felt deep pain and regret. I like that there's no punctuations. In a time of pain and suffering nothing is done in order or properly. The structure of this piece helps with imagery at least it does for me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

RayXor

10 Years Ago

thank you!

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Added on September 10, 2014
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RayXor
RayXor

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im 27 and have been through alot of crap in the past year so i decided to start writing again lets see where it goes... more..

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A Poem by RayXor