in motion

i walk into deep waters  to wash away my sin and as I'm standing there  my thoughts begin to swim beyond distant mountains  deep below the sea  there lies a hidden treasure never meant for man to see over golden pastures  high above the sky deep below the earth  this treasure always hides and deep inside all of us clocked behind our hearts is a key that opens any lock its the place we all should start

Author's Note

if you must comment on my grammar or spelling please show examples so i know how to improve also thanks for reading

Reviews

[Mohamed Boutaib]

I liked it, I like the way you played with anotyms here.. good work man

[RayXor]

thank you

[olla]

it's always an inside job.. chuckling softly here..

[Baby Ricochet]

You could stand to jazz up your rhymes a little more. They're kinda simple

[RayXor]

yeah it was gonna be a song but i just wasnt feeling it anymore