Accepted

Having fun and the memories of that fun, all wrapped in one.

Holding onto your warmth
your kisses
on my hand
your fingers
in mine

on this very night
you
loved me.
You are mine!
Feeling your kisses on the back
of my neck
O hot damn

Its soo on.
Feeling your mouth
at my bottom lip
biting down hard
Still feeling your teeth there.
Having fun
Is
Great
.
your legs undermine
moving

Laughing like crazy
Till I cry.

Holding onto you
making you close your eyes
Whispering in your ear.
You are mine.
You saying I love you back
means the world to me.
You mean the world to me
and much more

Raise your Glass
To happiness
and fun times
under the moon

being with friends
Is a great thing

The one you love
holding onto you
the entire time
I Love you.

I raise my spirits
for you
I Sent you a request for love.





You
Accepted. <3

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Ok, so aside from some grammatical errors, I love this piece. You do such a great job of describing the common human experience we all have....."You saying I love you back means the world to me...."....great line....this poem takes the reader on a journey and it's one that is hard to leave....well done...great write...:)