Gravity

Seeing your hands

tracing my skin
as if to write your name on it.
To make my nerves flinch
to make me smile

Seeing your eyes
as they.......

paint silhouettes of kisses
on my ribs
...at my waist

pushing my heart higher and higher into the sky
holding on to me the entire way.

you coloring these alabaster walls
with your smile
that makes my eyes roll
in the back of my head.

As we dance
this dance, done many times before
its all different.
The way you catch me
as I roll onto my slide

The way you grab my hand
when you make my mind
swing round and round

the way you let me assemble
the way you let me fall apart
the way you put me back together

the way you almost took it all from me

How you turned my dress
from white
to red.

You spun me around,
to feel your gentle kiss
to feel your hands
not wanting to let me go

how you make me weak
with every touch of the hand....

grab of my waist

the way you become my addiction
pumping my chest
becoming my blood flow

never letting me leave you

just the way I'm suppose to be
Here with you
Fragile
for you to hold me
touch
to take my strength

To never set me free
Letting me fall
into
Your
Gravity.

Reviews

[Robin]

emotion penned in seamless flow ~

[Stammers]

There are some great lines in this, it could do with some revising, I think parts can be a little wordy, e.g

the way you let me assemble
the way you let me fall apart
the way you put me back together

nothing work wouln't smooth out. Overall, really nice feel to this,

tracing my skin
as if to write your name on it.


Lushness :)