Cheers

Cheers

A Poem by Thecreekdontrise
"

hope where it once was forgotten

"
From far away,
everything looks perfect
the persistence of my mind
making me soo imperfect,
and yet you don't care
you say my track record isn't half as bad
and that what I still have
means allot
you respect me
and don't judge based on lies.
you said I should'nt be so judgmental to myself
you said I'm a great person
you
just getting out there after three years.
your caring.
and you really mean it
its not BS
its not tricks
your true
and I see that
I can see you for you
not who you are when your with your friends
but you
one who keeps family tight
and fans tighter
you have many,
never knowing.
who you really can be
a person who moves those around them
my smile I show now
is because of your truth
the way you show it for what it is
is courageous, not many can
tell the truth
and still be seen for the real man they are.
Wishing I had a figure like you
to keep me safe
because I need that person in my life
cause they know nothing about me.
You left a mark
one that will stay with me forever
thank you
for not being the same.
for being different
and for giving a damn about what I say
this is to you
this is a toast
to this very person
who will be a marine soon
and knows the years go by fast
to this very person who's made it
to my friend
that I hope to keep for awhile
Cheers
to happiness
and a successful career down the road
best wishes
and hopeful days ahead
my dear friend
Good luck.





© 2010 Thecreekdontrise


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cool and heartwarming poem...nice work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


beautiful~ heartfelt poetic~

Posted 14 Years Ago


I hope your friend gets to read this ~

Posted 14 Years Ago


A beautifully touching write....

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very Moving. I like it.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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