CheersA Poem by Thecreekdontrisehope where it once was forgotten
From far away,
everything looks perfect the persistence of my mind making me soo imperfect, and yet you don't care you say my track record isn't half as bad and that what I still have means allot you respect me and don't judge based on lies. you said I should'nt be so judgmental to myself you said I'm a great person you just getting out there after three years. your caring. and you really mean it its not BS its not tricks your true and I see that I can see you for you not who you are when your with your friends but you one who keeps family tight and fans tighter you have many, never knowing. who you really can be a person who moves those around them my smile I show now is because of your truth the way you show it for what it is is courageous, not many can tell the truth and still be seen for the real man they are. Wishing I had a figure like you to keep me safe because I need that person in my life cause they know nothing about me. You left a mark one that will stay with me forever thank you for not being the same. for being different and for giving a damn about what I say this is to you this is a toast to this very person who will be a marine soon and knows the years go by fast to this very person who's made it to my friend that I hope to keep for awhile Cheers to happiness and a successful career down the road best wishes and hopeful days ahead my dear friend Good luck. © 2010 ThecreekdontriseReviews |
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5 Reviews Added on September 23, 2010 Last Updated on September 23, 2010 AuthorThecreekdontriseOHAbout28 Returning to give you the raw trauma And therapy I only know how to expell through my words. more..Writing
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