Silent Love

Silent Love

A Poem by Thecreekdontrise

Girl Underwater Pictures, Images and Photos


Every turn I Make,
There you are
Keeping me without factual evidence
I'm trapped.
Here I Am,
being swarmed by you.
It was a sweet as honey,
now cold as ice.
Leave me
becoming weaker with every tear I shed.
Unable to even get up,
without your help.
You got what you wanted,
now I have to rely on you
for everything.
You
keeping me chained down
like the force of gravity
Wanting to put me 6 feet under,
finding it more fun to toy with live bait.
To get you sick thrill out of it.
My organs slowly shutting down,
one

By

one

even as I faintly look out the windows,

sky midnight blue,
white clouds passing over the moon.

This is not how I'm suppose to be
But your on me
and wont ever be off of me,
till I'm gone
Every time you enter the room
my built up strength is gone.

Let me go.

your vortex is killing me.
Even as I Try to forget you
My body shuts down,
even as I try to hold on longer,
thinking maybe I'll pull through,

you Destroy me more

Even as my eyes close for the last time,
I still see you.

Fragile Strength,
swept out from under me
feeling the cold ground
chills passing over my body.
My body heat,
nonexistent
skin loosing color
lips are blue
hair,
weak, broken.
Chains cuffing my small ankles
and flimsy wrists.
being numb to all emotion
my tears have dried up..
anger, weak.
Feeling the only thing I have left,
my bones
protruding from my skin,
being as I am
skin and bone.
The one thing I still know
Is you
keeping me down
pushed far down into the sea's floor
Chained.
To this floor,
to swim among the fishes
where no one
Will.

Find.

Me.....


 

 

© 2010 Thecreekdontrise


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Simple with nuance.

Posted 14 Years Ago


through deep depths you've poured the emotion~and created a very effective and strong poetic~

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow....strong POWERFUL emotions!! Almost depressing....I can feel your struggling through-out the poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


An angry storm of emotions, betrayed and helpless
failing to rise up from lack of strength and courage.
aA very sad write indeed..

Posted 14 Years Ago


you have literally have taken emotion to great depths ...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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