Make A Wish

Close your eyes,
Vision those fields
Lightning bugs,
your smile
Embrace me
The Sun meets the ground,
The stars wake.
Saying their good morning,
in the middle of night.
Feeling the dewy heat taste your skin
Making mends with the heat that Touched you before.
Making up for lost time
Making moments worth much more.
Clearing the smoke in the air
The moon whispers
Make a wish,
Knowing it will blow in the air.
Soon to a bottle in the water.
To be come a secret Scavenger.
Finding where your happiness is
Giving it that message in a bottle
that can't be written on paper.
Messages
that go back
to when you were younger.
Back when you were fresh and new
making it feel like
when you grow up
It will come true
Sharing its secret
with the world
See just how young you can be
when you close your eyes tight
and make it the same
just like when you were younger
like when you use to make wishes
about getting a pony
or getting that nice
Hot wheels car
But now,
its about your parents
maybe your Boyfriend
girlfriend
Or even about the current crises
Make a wish
Soon to be set free
soon to roam the spirit world
For an angel
to catch on its light wings
making it come to life
make a wish
close your eyes
Think
      Think
             Think...

Reviews

[Bubo]

We in a life time make wishes, as a child for the obvious, and later for things often unobtainable, but there is always hope with a wish......and we remember wishing for something as a child, and it came true...........very enjoyable reading with good imagery.

[Erin]

"its about your parents" Shouldn't it be it's? Just a thought about your grammar, other than that...
I really like how you capitilized what looks like random words, but then they seemed to make sense at the end. Your imagry is excellent in this piece. I really like this one. I'm pretty sure that this is the first piece I've ever read from you, and I think it's great. I'm definitely reading more. You haven't seen the last of me...

PBP