My Suprise

Feeling your hands trace my skin,
just above my right shoulder.
Earth like eyes, full of water you can drown in.
Your smile, like thousands for butterflies in the forest of the forgotten
Smelling your scent,
 when I'm so far away,

hands,
  stand together
and hold one another in graceful embrace

my grin, makes your arms extend
your sweet skin.
your hands burning and my back.
feeling your soft flesh,
 with my index finger.
getting carried away with each step I take with you.....
 
Being crawled away where no one can find me.
makes me wish you were here more
cause I miss you
hearing the rain.
washing away your face
rather do with out this loneliness..



Arms Flex, hands grip my sheets.
feeling her soft nose nestled on my neck, smelling my skin.
Her smile, lasting for a second.
Her Hazel eyes looking right at me.
her index finger tracing circles in my palm
her hands, soft like rosemary bushes in morning dew.

I Don't want to let you go.
I Don't want to wake up

I'm unable to not miss you
can't you hear me screaming for you in my head?
I Want you


his coffee brown eyes
put me to bed.
and I can't react.
take this sinking heart
and point it home
we have time
don't let me be alone
I'm falling,
your eyes knew me.
We Can't go back.
the moons have erased what we had.
my bed sheets hold me captive.
the stars interrogate me.
the guilt rolls up my body in the shadow of the passing cloud

I Miss you

She made my memories quick, but full of her smiles and playfulness
soft brown hair, put me the shame.
It's 4:00 in the morning
Its not like I'm scared of you
but whats a man to do?


He was my life
She was my air

He was the hand at my back.
She was the soft embrace that knew no boundaries

She never forgave herself.
I can feel, her
even when were miles away
She was my love
everything I knew I wanted

She was the girl I wanted to wake to.
but I changed all of this

she was my lifeline
this woman of many ages.
many thoughts
this woman kept me on my toes
she was everything

and to my surprise
I never said what I wanted to say
I just left it at that
I never gave it a good note to leave on
it was bitter
and put in quotations
I never said what I wanted

I need to see you
we need to say it all
we need each other



Eyes close.
Dreams fade.
and the mind is put to rest.
maybe to forgive another day.
and make amends.
Maybe to never leave again
to never be fragile again
to forgive, move on and love.


I Don't want to feel like this
but I'm so tired of missing him.
I don't want to beg for your time
I want you to be with me
I wish I never messed up
cause I know I'm not easy to handle
just  don't forget my love for you
today
or tomorrow
please
don't forget me
don't forget you love me today.....
my baby


My surprise,
our cries

Her guilt
my loving heartfelt forgiveness

My Forgiven
His love
embraces me one more day
to know he's mine
all mine.
he is,
my surprise

Reviews

[Una Xoto]

This is a wonderful piece & I can see that you have a gift for writing. I do feel however that this is a diamond in the ruff. It feels like it's in need of a touch of polishing. This like everything else I have read by you is quite strong. I look forward to reading more from you.

[Robin]

very good , you engage the senses

[Octob3r Star]

Touching

[Coyote Poetry]

Some surprises are better then others. A very good poem of love and passion. I like the gentle movement to the built-up of wanting and needing more. You can write a poem of love and raw emotion. We need to feel wanted and desired. A outstanding poem.
Coyote