The Unlimited

The Unlimited

A Poem by Thecreekdontrise

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The moment,The Contact.
Softer than Her Hair,
Sweeter than her touch.

She feels like the ice queen.

He,
Warmer than the sun on a Mid-Fall Evening
The same Way he felt, in her dream.

Summer night touches,
Toss her into another vortex.
Her mind,
Making Pixels of him
Soo Real.

Looking from far, Noticing her sing her heart out,
his mind, smiling. Doing something He can't in person.

Realize what this means
Everymoment.
All

I

See

Is

Me
breathing harder,
twitching,
and grinning
knowing his touch, is sweeter than her skin.
Softer than her lips.

When she looks at you. she see's something,
less Shallow
More Deeper
than her dreams
that she can't stop thinking of.
Let them take up.
Take up her air.
Her Mind.
Her Mental capacity



This smile that she releases into The Atmosphere
Makes you Giggle
Makes her type words wrong.

She feels her pain.
Yet you make it go away.

Like an ice cream man,
treating kids for their heat exhaustion.
Making their parents mad.
Knowing, they'd have to sneak everything.

Or force making it more Akward.
than making friends.
Making you wish you took back
everything.

His Passion, is Unlimited.
Their Lives, As Unlimited as they want it to be.

Their possibilities,
endless

As she thinks,
He Looks Down.

Hearing his heart beat.
Feeling so special

More Special than the last girl.

She may be lucky,
but soon he will be a very good luck charm.

Bringing her happiness
Making him,
the luckiest man on earth.

His Passion, is Unlimited
Their Lives, As Unlimited as they want it to be

Her Love For Him,
Will Always be Unlimited

He'll be there when you wake up,

he will never hurt her,

knowing his Love for her,

will always be Unlimited
Like the Fountain Of Youth.

Always Running,
Always
Alive.

© 2010 Thecreekdontrise


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Dear RayJay:

I am honored to by your friend. RayJay I like your poem "The Unlimited." I would like to consider it for publication in my magazine: The Aegis Literary Review located at: http://aegisliteraryreview.com. Please go the submission page, and follow the "HeyPublisher procedure for making submissions to the "Review."

If accepted, you will be paid for your poem via PayPal.

Sincerely,
Ronald Ayers, Editor

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Dear RayJay:

I am honored to by your friend. RayJay I like your poem "The Unlimited." I would like to consider it for publication in my magazine: The Aegis Literary Review located at: http://aegisliteraryreview.com. Please go the submission page, and follow the "HeyPublisher procedure for making submissions to the "Review."

If accepted, you will be paid for your poem via PayPal.

Sincerely,
Ronald Ayers, Editor

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This lovely piece of writing came full circle.
I love the positive vibe..well done...

Posted 14 Years Ago


You took in many direction with your poem. I like the different situation you have create with your words. When we get lucky and find the things or people who can make us content. It can be a good day. I like the complete poem. Many good examples and I likes the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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