Shadows Of the Mind

Just Let me Go
Before its to late
What I fool I was to think I could live in two worlds.
I've given up.
my innermostself is broken
as I stare up at Venus
shining brighter than any star,
the only star out there
lonely
by itself. reminding me of myself
I don't want to fall
but
its to late
I should just go back
I'm a fool for thinking I could ever accomplish my happiness
and being loved at the same time.
I don't know where to go from here.
as I look at you, thinking you might catch me when I fall
as I end up chasing your shadow always hoping you'd be there
as I look up the shadows of the trees all pass by so quickly
like its not even there
like there nothing real
its all just shadows
and little games
its to late
I'm attached.
I've been struck
I'm in love.
knowing he's prob not half as emotional as I am
knowing he cares about me
knowing he means every word
but when its all said and done,
his shadow will be all that remains
when he goes to catch me when I fall
or when I look at the sun set
and for a second feel his touch.
his shadow will vanish
and it will be as nothing ever happened.
you hold my heart
your future holds yours
what a fool I was to think
I could live in both worlds,
the shadows of my mind
have gotten the best of me
they've played their little games.
they won.
Love never hurt so much.
I've never been this lonely.
We don't have to speak.
My way of being single for so long now.
really has killed my thought.
I'm done.
even as you IM me,
all I can think of
is your shadow
saying goodbye

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Everyone has felt like this at one time or another.
The thought of emptiness and the frustration that
follows, heart broken cold and alone. You've
description is flawless...

[Randolf Ramos]

Great imagery, portrays a girl with personalities. Great

Aw I really love this! You portrayed the feeling of this loneliness very well! A few grammar mistakes here n there but overall a really touching write! :)