Tide.

A Poem by Ray

You are the rising tide and you’ve caught me by surprise.

Darling, just let go. I don’t want to drown.

Please don’t take me down

with you

with you.

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A lovely write with tidal waves of beauty. Bravo............

This poem is just lovely. The rising and falling of a tide of emotions that you're not prepared for, that you cannot bare to drown with.

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Added on August 3, 2014
Last Updated on August 3, 2014
Tags: tide, drown, darling, let go, with you

I like to pretend I can write things that are worth reading. more..

Again.