*Love*

This is a song i wrote. Please, Please tell me what you think about it and give me some advise, thanks =)

Begining:

Look in your eyes then i realize its you that i want in my life

Cant get much better than you here with me,

i see it all in you,

oh, i see everything

 

Chorus:

My Heartache, the constant pain,

how could it get worse than this.

sensation, explanation,

Why did this happen to me

Then you came and saved me

from everything, everything

 

 

Alight well thats all i have so far...i dont even have a title =( haha

Hope you liked it.

Author's Note

Give advise if you want...or just tell me what you think..thanks =)

Reviews

[Lauren]

Hey...it's lala! Ok, Lauren. AMANDA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Holy crap, why didn't you tell me you could write like that???????????

[hershey's kiss]

wow that's actually really deep... i mean even though it's not far, it's still really good, especially the chorus
write more! =]

[ToxicTears]

I really like what you have so far...........keep working on it, i think it's going to be great!