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A Poem by pureXrawnesty
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A poem I wrote a while back and deiced to finish it, a guideline for real or fake.

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You say it's not my fault 
I say you lied,
You say I'm nobody's victim,
I say You had that choice to decide, 
Because if anyone's I'd be yours, 
In a smaller comparison you were my god,
You gave me life,   
If a murderer has a knife, 
Shouldn't pessimistic be a synonym for realistic, 
We all get starter cards so when the next deck comes would you put yours  on the table and take a risk, 
Pain is like a cyst, 
Burrowed deep inside,  
So much it seeps out while it try's to hide,
Strange inexpiable, unpredictable things happen all the time,
Do you but you shouldn't lie to a kid telling them they'll be fine,
If I could press rewind, I would press decline, every time that you randomly decided to chime, 
As fucked up as it may seem,
In life there's no line that you have to read between, 
Everything is right in front of you,
You just have to accept what's true,
For those with real loyalty that's the hardest thing to do.



                                                                                                                  ~RAWNESTY~

© 2013 pureXrawnesty


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"Pain is like a cyst,

Burrowed deep inside,

So much it seeps out while it try's to hide,

Strange inexpiable, unpredictable things happen all the time,

Do you but you shouldn't lie to a kid telling them they'll be fine,"

That was some fine writing...Bravo.......

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pureXrawnesty

11 Years Ago

Thank you!!!! ^.^
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)................



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"Pain is like a cyst,

Burrowed deep inside,

So much it seeps out while it try's to hide,

Strange inexpiable, unpredictable things happen all the time,

Do you but you shouldn't lie to a kid telling them they'll be fine,"

That was some fine writing...Bravo.......

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pureXrawnesty

11 Years Ago

Thank you!!!! ^.^
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)................

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Added on October 29, 2013
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Tags: life, trials, family, real, fake, people

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pureXrawnesty
pureXrawnesty

Jackson, MI



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I'm a 24 year old writer. Self Publishing my first Sci-Fi novel by May 2017. I dabbled and then mastered my passion. Only Time will tell at this point. more..

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