BUM.

This is my first Poem that I had ever wrote. It's about the love of my life.

Some May Mistake it with needy,
But your Love simply makes me Greedy,
When you Left not only my heart but my whole soul was torn apart,
So now I'm stuck replaying our memories from the start,
Tiny Puny Like an ant,
Every time I mention your  name my friends go on a rant,
Saying I should move on and forget but I just cant, 
You stepped on my heart and now its on the bottom of your shoe,
Sticky icky like glue,
It just kills me to hear you say our love was never true,
Its okay don't worry about me you gotta do what you gotta do,
The next time your in the city with your new man having fun and acting silly,
Realize the bum on the corner isn't looking for pity,
Just a reason why love is so s****y.

 ~RAWNESTY~

Author's Note

Any kind of criticism is a learning experience.