Beautiful Child

I just had to vent... :(

Tiny hands
Tiny feet
Beautiful child, I long to meet

Tiny eyes
Tiny arms
Beautiful child, you deserve no harm

Tiny nose
Tiny smile
Beautiful child, you should've stayed here a while

Beautiful child, how could your mom not see?
You are special, and alive just like me!

 Beautiful child, how could your mom not know?
You are a human being from your head to your toes!

It breaks my heart to hear your story but you'll live with God in all his glory!

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Awe, such a sweet poem, it is sad when people get abortions. I like this because even though it's a vent, it doesn't seem hateful in any way, it's just questions that a lot of people probably ask when they hear these types of things. I think you wrote it perfectly, I like your short and sweet poems, often times you have a lot to say in such a small space.

Great Job

[StayAnchored]

Thank you very much! You're so sweet! :)
I honestly appreciate your reviews!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

^^ You're welcome, glad you like my reviews xD

[Levi Levin]

This is a wonderful poem indeed. Great job!

[StayAnchored]

Thanks for the review!

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Such a sweet poem I love it.

Thank you for sharing.


Blessings. kindred poet

[StayAnchored]

Thank you!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're quite welcome. its my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

AMEN! Abortion needs to not even be an option in life. I am against it all of the way. I have always said that I don't want a kid, of course I am only 17 years old too. Most of my friends have daydreamed and talked about names they would call their kids. I am sitting their all awkward and covering my ears. Haha! I wouldn't ever think of aborting a child though. Adoption is always an option. People can be inconsiderate and dumb. It is a fact that when the doctors kill the baby inside, it already had a small heartbeat. We need to stop abortion as much as possible. This poem is so sad and the topic upsets me so much too. Great write!

[StayAnchored]

Thanks!
Its just sad to see how many kids could have lived if given the chance.. :(

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome. You are definitely right.

[Kieta!]

AMEN SISTER ugg I wish I hadn't voted for myself :( This is amazing!!!!! (Btw my favorite singer is Francesca Battistelli too!)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you very much! :D
You have wonderful taste in music! ;)

[marie]

A powerful stand against a touchy subject:) abortion really is horrible!! you have captured this horror in its essence!!

[StayAnchored]

Thanks, Marie! :)

[Angel Criner]

Awe this is heartbreakingly beautiful, enjoyed.

[StayAnchored]

Thank you very much!! :)

[Erik Daniel]

Wow Lillie! This is was beautiful. Abortion is such an ugly thing. I love that you are speaking out against it! I wrote a poem a while back called "Not Ready Yet". You should check it out. I think you would like it.

[StayAnchored]

It is a very ugly thing! Thanks for the review. I'll check it out! :)