We must go

Hey guys! I'm going to be on a mission trip next week(going to NEW ORLEANS!) if y'all want to pray it would help tremendously! We must go and share God's word! :D

We must go:
Live to change the day
Live to show the way

We must go:
Shine to share His glory
Shine to share His story

We must go:
Smile at the women
Smile at the children

We must go
To spread Your news
and lead other lost sinners back to You!

Reviews

[marie]

beautiful:) just a suggestion, but the colons you dont really need in poetry, of course it is the writers choice and if you feel they should be then keep them and don't you dare let me change you mind:) now on to the message:) absolutely loved it!! something like this should be shown to the world:) great job:)

[StayAnchored]

thanks again! I really respect you insightful reviews! I should probably take the colons out but I am on my phone which makes it a pain to do lol

[Sir Joseph]

its ok lol she never capitalizes anything at all lol

[StayAnchored]

But her poems are AMAZING! ;)

[Sir Joseph]

Oh yes they Are!!!! ;)

[marie]

ahh ok:) and no my poems really aren't!!!!

[Sir Joseph]

Two against one. we win! yes they are!

[marie]

evidence!!!

[Sir Joseph]

We both said it so:P

[marie]

uh huh, then really where is she combatting my facts? hmm?

[StayAnchored]

You have a wonderful eye for words and they flow miraculously, Marie! :)

[marie]

darn it....ok you two win!!!:)

[Sir Joseph]

There she is! see 2-1 we win! you are an amazing writer! :) Thank you for backing me Lillie lol

[marie]

grrr.... for now you win...lol:)

[StayAnchored]

Of course, Sir Joseph :)

[Neon]

Lol .. Nice work, I enjoyed reading the poem.

[StayAnchored]

Thank you very much! :)

[Wórdsmíth]

well, that's again an amazin' write by you. I love your this way. That's why i always love to read your way...well written

[StayAnchored]

Aww! Thank you so much :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Aww! My pleasure so much :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like this, exactly the reason why people go on missions to try and be of help to those that need Him most. I hope everything goes smoothly for you and He gives you strength and right words to say.

Great Job

[StayAnchored]

Thank you so much! :D

[Sir Joseph]

I really love how you portrayed a version of basically the great commission! This poem reminds me of the song by Lyricyst. Deny Him. Great Piece!! :)

[StayAnchored]

Thanks!
This poem was really placed on my heart because I adore missions and spreading
God's love.
This poem reminds me of "God of Justice" by Tim Hughes. I am going to look up "Deny Him" and see if I like it :)

[Sir Joseph]

Awesome! :) the song really slaps american Christianity in the face