My Wall and Tower

This poem is about giving your head to God to guard instead of letting some "evil and jaded guy" in :)

Tearing down my safety wall
I watch it crumble, I watch it fall

I had built it up and guarded it well
It had a system of security bells

To give me notice of an intruder,
Who trespassed my heart from the very start

He broke in and ripped it down
My wall inside that was built on pride

I was hurt by you and it scarred me for life 
I thought I would one day be your wife

All the pain you brought to me 
Made me realize we weren't meant to be 

I rebuilt my tower and rebuilt my wall
So they would stand proud and tall

I gave my King the key to my heart
I should have given it to him from the start

He loves me and made me
He is my true love

He will always be enough
He will live in my tower till my last, final hour

Reviews

[Angel Criner]

Tragedy, yet for the best, huh?

[StayAnchored]

Yep! Thanks

[Chidoriflower]

I like the hope in this it inspires...after destruction comes hope.....excellent job, Lil' J. :D

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! :D

[Chidoriflower]

You're very welcome!!!

[Silhouette]

This is so beautiful, I love that you took something from this tradegy and used it to lift you up before you fell all the way down. Awesome job, as always :)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you so much!! =D

[Silhouette]

Ypu are so welcome! =)

[marie]

great job:) your poetry is getting so much better!! i love it:)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! It means so much ro hear that!! :D

[StayAnchored]

Ps. I know it needs some work and I will as soon as I feel better cause I have a terrible cold :)