Daydream Love

This poem is about how girls dream of the "perfect guy" but there was only ONE perfect guy, Jesus! :D

I can see him now,

Plain as day,

His hair flowing the perfect way.

His sparkly blue eyes light up the sky

He is the perfect Christian guy.

His smile, His laugh, all makes my heart feel like it’s under attack

Then I wake from my dream and realize he will never be.

My real guy is perfect.

Perfect as can be.

His name is Jesus and He rescued me.

I love Him and respect him more than words can say

I will live with Him one day.

Reviews

[Sir Joseph]

Lovely poem that is true! Jesus is perfect for us and We are the bride for He is the groom! Bravo :)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! He definitely is perfect for us!

[Acer]

Beautiful, i loved the package, word's are nice & powerful. Overall rating is excellent.

[StayAnchored]

Thanks so much! It means a lot to me that you took time to review it! :)

[Acer]

My pleasure ;-'), i didn't waste my time to read your work indeed. Nicely written.

[Silhouette]

This is incredibly beautiful and sweet. Your words flow so wondorously, too. Well done :)

[StayAnchored]

Thanks!! This one flowed so fast. :)

[Silhouette]

It's really good, and you're welcome :)

[marie]

beautiful, though i think it would help to make that last line two

[StayAnchored]

Thanks :)
I really appreciate your constructive reviews!!

[marie]

no problem:)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I agree with this...first we need to love and follow Jesus, but that doesn't mean later down the road He won't lead you to another person to love and marry. Just got to wait and see what He has planned for you.

Good Job

[StayAnchored]

Thanks! And I know God has a plan for me with my future. I just meant he won't be perfect ;)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

haha I see...well no one is perfect and you're welcome