The Snowman

I felt inspired when I wrote this... It might be hard to get what I meant by this, but I don't care. :P

The Snowman watches as the flakes fall.

The Snowman yells but no one calls.

The Snowman melts when it rains.

The Snowman is afraid of pain.

The Snowman is all alone, while you cuddle at your home.

Take time time to listen before you melt and tell other about what you've dealt.

You will realize we are all the same, the kid on the street and the man with no name.

Reviews

[AKMaleeke]

Nice Poem :) Short & sweet

[StayAnchored]

Thank you!

[lissalovesyou]

A very deep and thoughtful poem. Yes, I do indeed feel inspired.
lissalovesyou:)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you very much for all your reviews! I really needed some more positive(ness) in my life right now, so thanks! :)

[lissalovesyou]

Same here. Just returning the favor, since you made me smile by entering these in my contest.
lissalovesyou:)

[Angel Criner]

A perspective I've never known... Such an empathetic write and I adore the moral.

[StayAnchored]

Thank you very much! :)

[Sir Joseph]

Random poem that has deep meaning. Bravo!

[StayAnchored]

Thanks again :)
I tend to be bad with "deep" things because I am hardly ever serious but this one was really placed on my heart! :D

[Sir Joseph]

I can tell! it is a really great poem!:)

[once upon a time]

Really good!

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! :)

[Silhouette]

This is so sweet and sad at the same time. Too many good lines to quote, nicely done :)

[StayAnchored]

Thanks :D

[Silhouette]

You're welcome ^.^

[luviva]

ohh what asweet and thoughtful poem
i get every single thing that you intended to put out there when writing this poem
the snow man is made en left out all lonely to the cruel weather as we cuddle infront of a hearth and still complain how cold it is. this is such great immagery and linking the idea to society it was so brave and clever!!
those people out there on the streets just imagine many lords have thousands of rooms in there houses bt they would never open their doors to that homeless person.
well written its such an educative yet detailed, simple and straight to the point.
loved it!1

[StayAnchored]

Thank you so much!! That is probably the sweetest/longest comment I have ever gotten! :D

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

hmm this is very interesting. It seems that the snowman mirrors people that are left behind and ignored after awhile. I really like the last line the best.

Great Job

[StayAnchored]

That was exactly what I was trying to get across! Thanks for reviewing! :D

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Well you did a good job then lol It also reminded me of the snowman that lost his head outside xD

[StayAnchored]

Haha! :D

[Ethale Captor]

A true and beautiful write.

[StayAnchored]

I adore getting kind reviews!! Thank you so much for taking time to read it! It Definitely wasn't my best but it is true!

[Ethale Captor]

I believe you, and it was nice.

[marie]

great start,fifth line is a little iffy, but still a great write over all :)

[StayAnchored]

I totally agree. Thank ya

[marie]

no prob :)