Stormy Days

I wrote this a while back and I know it isn't my best but I thought I would share it!!

Storms will come and storms will go but your the one who gives us hope.

Through the rain and through the hail only God's will prevails.

Splashing, jumping all around, just enjoy God's peaceful sound.

God is like our lucky charm, when with him we know no harm.

So dance with God in the rain and nothing will ever be the same.

Author's Note

Please keep in mind that I am not a poet! lol

Reviews

[StayAnchored]

I have a question for y'all...

Can y'all see the photos I've posted or are they private?

[Silhouette]

You seem like a poet to me. Your words flow miraculously, and they send so many images to my mind. A very nice write thank you for sharing

[StayAnchored]

OMGosh!! Y'all guys are so awesome! Thank you! I am by no means a poet! Lol

[Silhouette]

You have the creativity of one, though…you are welcome :)

[Zoelouise]

hey Lillie, just been reading your work as requested. This one is my favourite :D I agree with Marie's review

[StayAnchored]

Thanks!

[marie]

great job try adding a little more, it'll give it more depth

[StayAnchored]

Thanks a whole bunch!! :)
I'll work some more on it soon

[marie]

no prob i see alot of potential here

[StayAnchored]

:D