Life The Up Hill Struggle

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From when we are born

Life has it in for us

Challenging, Beating

Us into the ground

 

Never Stopping

Never Caring

Just Beating

And Beating

 

But we the strong

Shall stand up

We will take

What is ours

 

And if we fail

The Dark shall come

And take from us

What is most precious

 

Life

Reviews

[Natalie C]

Up hill struggle is right, ironic though seeing that we are all born just to die in the end. Liked the way how you made the light sound good and yet you describe the dark ones, looking for the light.
Interesting, seeing that the two seldom goes hand in hand.

Good twist

[Leran Vakem]

Oh I really liked this one, it show how life can get one down. I like the compairisoin of dark to losing hope. If you lose your hope, you are dead to life.

Well done
Leran Vakem