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A Poem by Raven Malak

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At long last

The time has come

For the ones like us

To finally find peace

 

No more changing

Just for the sake

To please the ones

That say they love you

 

Finding the one

Knowing in your heart

That this time

It will work, it will Survive

© 2008 Raven Malak


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Now this was a beautiful piece, really liked the soft tone with which you have written it. Still keeping true to your style as you almost "immerge" from the darkness where many of us finds our piece into the light where darkened angels finds their peace.

You know one could end up searching their whole lives for a feeling that you so beautifully described


Posted 16 Years Ago


This is beautiful. It really hits home for me. Very hopeful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is one for everyone, one that will not try and change us into something else.
Keeping ones hope up during the time while searching is a very hard thing to do
Keep it up my friend and brother
Leran Vakem

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like your poem. It's very positive in its message and
reads real well.

Really like it!

Tina



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 13, 2008

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Raven Malak
Raven Malak

Kempton Park, South Africa



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