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A Poem by Raven Malak

 

You Look And Stare
Pointing and Hating
Judging And Condemning
But Not Knowing
 
Not Knowing What
What It Is
That’s In Our Heart
 
Seeing The Hate
In Your Eye’s
Wondering What
 
What Have I Ever
Ever Done To You
To Deserve All This
All This Hate
 
Let Me Go
Let Me Be
It’s Mine, Mine I Say
Leave My Life To Me

© 2008 Raven Malak


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"Leave My Life To Me"

Hell yes! Something I felt like screaming out so many times before. I have to agree with the previous reviewers the large front (even though your trademark) really worked with this piece.

Making your words even louder, more clear and more determined.
Good for you!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Haven't we all been there?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The large font made it a mind scream for me. simple yet so profound. Great read

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I love the font you used. It added more to the poem. I definitely can relate to this writing. Good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Don't we all just wish to live our lifes the way we want to. Great, really enjoyed it
Leran Vakem

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Raven Malak
Raven Malak

Kempton Park, South Africa



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Well what's there to tell? I was born in 1984 on the 17th of May. I listen to Metal, Goth, Rock and Black Metal. Well like I have been told I am a Evil Good Person always willing to help. Well that's.. more..

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