Corners Of My Mind

Corners Of My Mind

A Poem by Raven Malak

 

There is a place
In my mind
Where all the love
Has gone and died
 
We walk we talk
But more we hate
Never caring
Never healing
 
It breaks us down
Into the ground
Beating you harder
Without any site of end…

© 2008 Raven Malak


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I understand this poem...the pain in still being with someone you used to love so much and there is not really anything left. We walk, we talk, but more we hate...it pretty much says it all. It's like groundhog day. Great write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


A truely dark piece of work this
Leran Vakem

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 12, 2008

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Raven Malak
Raven Malak

Kempton Park, South Africa



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