The Reflection

What seems to be a day of glee

becomes a day of gore.

With so much fear in you my dear

over a 2 cent w***e.

Just patch that hatch and catch that batch

and bask in your galore.

For what will be and what you'll see

is what you were before.

Reviews

[Winslow Des Totes]

Wow! I love the Devil Dr Suess in you! If you don't mind me calling it that ;) This is fantastic! Short and to the point with a powerful ending that just makes this piece a real thinker! I'm favoriting so that I can come back again and again. Nice work!!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words and thoughts. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to honest and true ending. Thank you Raven for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i am quite taken by this writing...others will touch us along the way....but good or bad the connection...when it is over we are back to who we are...we can't hide... even when we try to lose ourselves in another.

[LeahWhoWallaroo]

I love when a small amount of content can make me think so much. :)

[Kenna Rei]

This made my day better.

Beautiful, and oh so true!

[B.J]

Your work here made me smile with words that rhyme, your anology of a reflection is perfect.