Just war

Just war

A Poem by RavenShadow

I don't understand why I always hurt you
I swear I like you a lot
I try to change and mend my ways
but after a week change is forgot
The arguments shake the boundaries of my heart
I swear not to do you wrong 
Yet my emotions overrule my thoughts
Then something happens 
I feel forlorn
But you deny me the affection that I need
I stray to grip your attention
Yet then I am at fault again
I agree then explain my affliction
You promised to provide me with the love I crave
yet you always fall short
I warned you once and then again
For your heart I always sought
I try to change I swear I do
but you seem not to care at all
For when I cry you simply watch
No feelings
No care
Just war

© 2018 RavenShadow


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"I don't understand why I always hurt you

I swear I love you a lot"
"I swear not to do you wrong

Yet my emotions overrule my thoughts"
Like the way these two sets of sentences echo to each other.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on June 19, 2016
Last Updated on August 5, 2018

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RavenShadow
RavenShadow

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I have a specialty for writing dark themed pieces. I love every piece of my work that I show you guys and spend a lot of time on the wording of my pieces. I hope you enjoy reading what I have written .. more..

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A Poem by RavenShadow