Who Am I?

who am i? am i to be friends with? who am i to you? what am i? am i meaningful?

"Who Am I?"

LOOKING AT MY REFLECTION

SCARS ALL OVER

BROKEN MIRROR IN FRONT OF ME

BLOOD POURING

TEAR DROPS FALLING , PAINFUL SOUND

AS I PICKED A SMALL PIECE OF THE MIRROR

IT SLIPPED AT MY HAND

A SCAR FORMING , BLOOD POURING

NOBODY HEAR ME SCREAMING

NOBODY SEE'S ME CRYING

NOBODY SAW ME PASSING THROUGH

NOBODY TALKS TO ME 

WHERE ARE THE FRIENDS THAT I CALL UPON?

AM I MEANING FULL TO THEM?

EVERYBODY RUNS AWAY OF ME

WHO AM I TO THEM?

WHO AM I TO YOU?

WHO AM I TO MYSELF?

WHO AM I?

Author's Note

Hi guys my fellow writers as i recall i am new at writing poems however the poem that i wrote is based upon what i fell and what i have felt all away long

Reviews

[Aphy!]

Really sorry you felt like this. It's a dark and lonely road that I've also walked on but slowly trying to recover from (but this is besides the point) the point is you sang the very same song I've been singing to myself for a long time. I could feel it (like deep down) and it made me a bit emotional.
This was a very beautifully written poem and I enjoyed reading it. Hopefully you make it and finally find happiness because really...the world really isn't half bad and we all need happy people. Again...well done and thank you for sharing this amazing poem!
Aphy

[Mystical Rose]

It's my honor , and thank you for a wonderful comment of your's i really hope too that i can find my own happiness :)

[Aphy!]

My pleasure, good luck on your quest for happiness hey

[Sabrina Rauch]

Sometimes life does feel this way to others and I have felt the same experience. This shows that we may not all have someone to call upon. We face many challenges and I hope you have overcome yours in a way. If ever you need help just venture to my page and send me a message. This writing is beautiful but I hope you never have to feel this way again.

[Mystical Rose]

Thank You for your wonderful comment and thank you again for being concern at me i just hope that they dont throw me like a trash anymore , that they will only need me because they were in trouble or something , and i asure you if i may have to overcome a problem like this again i'll message your page :)

[HippieSoulPunx]

Sorry you feel this way. It's a lonely road sometimes, and even when you have supportive people in your life, sometimes those black clouds make you feel isolated and like no-one cares. It's like you're obviously hurting and no-one notices, like you're invisible or they're blind, and it can drive you crazy. Very sad, emotional writing, something I can relate to a lot, so if you want to reach out to someone to listen to, feel free to send me a message or something. Sad writing, but very beautiful.

[Mystical Rose]

Sure thing! i will definitely message you im happy that i expressed me feeling at this poem thank you for being concern :)

[Urja Gokani]

well it was creepy but its a true fact about live that even if someone sees you die no one will help you but the poem was fab as it was based on our real lives thanks for sharing it it was beautiful :)

[Mystical Rose]

Thank you again :) haha sorry if it is creepy but that is just how i fell every day , every hour and every second or my life thanks for reading it :)

[Urja Gokani]

welcome :)