Take Me

falling madly in love with a dark gothic

Take me my gothic knight

You who awakens something inside me

Like no other before

In my dreams your there

So dark,so serious

Demons cower in fear

By the sight of your shadow

For you who knows no boundaries 

Let me serve you

As your tamed maiden

Standing by your side under the

Misty night sky

Take me....

I offer to you a rose

A token of my love

A symbol of my passion

Take me

Reviews

[William Liston]

I like how you pay attention to the visual presentation of your poems. It makes them very pleasant to read.
As for the actual words in this, I loved it. The descriptions are vivid and I could feel the emotion. Great work!

-William Liston

[Raven]

thank you for your honesty