Cryptic Love

for my true love i wrote this for him as a gift from my heart.

Spending my days dreaming of you

My cryptic prince

Alpha of the night

King of the temple.

By your side standing

Without struggle, no regret.

Bound by fate

Craving you

Craving me

Lips touch

Flesh are one

Hearts unite.

My black angel of the dark

Who takes my breath with one touch

A moon that shines in my darkness

Saves me from eternal blackness,nothingness

Nocturnal Souls evermore

Forever Love.

Author's Note

new at writing poems and trying different styles,please be respectful for any comments you may have.I am open to any ideas of how to make it better

Reviews

[Papaya]

Hi Raven, I think if you are new you are off to a good start.
My first poem ever was not near as good. :)