This Feeling of Love

This poem will sweep you off your feet, just as love occasionally does.

 This creature we call man.  He stands tall and fierce.  His hair jagged, his eyes piercing blue.  His body language melts slowly through my soul, leaving me limp in complete infatuation.  His voice is raspy, yet soft like white caps on the sea.  His charm is perfection.  His heart is as a pot of gold.  My love for this man is like an infinite ocean of honey.  This feeling of love, this powerful glorious emotion, can feed on us like an angry lion; but always knows how to reel us back in.  What a beautiful sensation. 

Reviews

[Bmmed94]

Yet again well done, you have an excellent command of grammar. You also have an amazing visually gripping aspect. Well done.

[Raven Goodpaster]

Thank you so much. This really means a lot!