Save Me

Save Me

A Poem by Raven666

Save me

Save me from this pain

This horror of life

I don’t want to deal with this pain

This depression

I can’t stand to see you happy but then look at myself in a mirror

To see this

This empty shell of a life

This nothingness

This numb person

I don’t care anymore

I don’t care what you think

I don’t care whether you hate me or not

I don’t want to lose the person that you’re taking away

Way from me         

You’re not only take that person away from me

But you’re also take a piece of myself along with them

And piece by piece you’re taking more of the part of me that cares

That cares about you

That cares about life

That cares about living

That cares about everything

From the dirt of the floor to the highest cloud in the sky

Why did you do this to me?

What did I do to you?

This is what I want to know?

This is what I need to know?

This is what I desire to know?

If nothing else then just tell me why?

Why you did this?

Why you hate me?

Why you’re taking away my life piece by piece?

© 2010 Raven666


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hi,
this is very interesting. keep writing!! Kat24

Posted 13 Years Ago



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