love triangle

Love,

a beautiful feeling,

a wonderful sight,

until one day when your love leaves,

running to get away,

the person you loved now with someone else,

a torn feeling of dispair and depression,

your love,

in the hands of another,

a dark cloud follows you everwhere,

until one day when another love comes your way,

your happy for your first love is forgotten,

you have found another,

your heart is full of love,

until one day when your first love comes,

and asks to be your again,

you think for a moment,

and days turn into weeks,

then weeks turn into months,

and you get up the courage to say,

"no" because you are happy,

finally happy,

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Loved this one.. great rhythm, rhyme and flow. Even greater that you are free from such a thing... having the choice and choosing the one that finally makes you happy. What a hard choice that would be.. that of your first love and the newest person you met. Creatively a masterpiece as many have faced these sorts of realistic choices in life.. never knowing which way to turn as either could potentially be wrong.

First loves are sometimes overbuilt by fantasy.. and most likely too remembered as the most impacting relationship only because it's the first.. first for many things which can be really intense.. sometimes that should be left as just a great memory! Great feeling with this.. good luck with your future!

[Kat24]

Hi,
Nice Job. Keep writing. Kat24