Life to death

Life to death

A Poem by Raven666

Life like a party,

Friends, Life, Death, silence,

Death like a whisper.

© 2009 Raven666


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Hi,
This is a very interesting wirte. Keep writing. Kat24

Posted 15 Years Ago
A very interesting Haiku comparing life and death. The imagery used here re-inforces the central theme to the reader. Have only one problem with your Haiku, "wisper" should be "whisper". It will not change your syllable count for the final line. Thank you for sharing this very interesting Haiku with us.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Viroqua, WI



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My name is Jena. I have an older brother and five pets named Coco(my rabbit), Shadow and Raven(my two cats), U-Neek and Lena(my two dogs). I love sotfball and soccer. My parents are happily married.. more..

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