Turning Red

my first riddle. please comment.

I am always hungry,

I must always be fed,

The finger I lick,

Well soon turn to red.

 

--- a fire.

Reviews

[Kat24]

Hi,
Raven666 this is a good poem. Kat24

[Ryosei Takashi Hime]

Ohmagod, I love this. X3 I'm gonna use it on my sister. She's a little dense. XD

[Karrar]

Sweet XD

[Tate Morgan]

Nice thought But I wanted more

[Aurora]

Interesting. I can definitely see how that is a fire.
It was almost too easy. (;