Timeline

1:13pm

Regenerate morals long lost to dragons

Yet a demon resumes exhibiting incorporated fabrications

Head hung as silence grips my atmosphere

I glower at black keys

1:14pm

Father devoured by cerebral malady

I wish I knew thee

1:15pm

Pulling teeth

Blood

The hum of the modem is my lullaby

1:16pm

Time atrophies in electronic clicks and clacks      

Tomorrow is so distant

Impossible to reach

1:17pm

Gun pressed to my temple

Voices continue to digest me

Make them stop

All desires are void

1:18pm

Gunshot

Reviews

[sivan]

i love it> it has a cold informal structure almost like a police report

[AYVID N]

A spine-chilling write.

Sometimes celebral maladies just prove too deadly to be overcome!

[Infinite hexes]

WOW, all I can say is wow. I think this is one of the most creative poems I've ever read. Great job, and thank you for the read request :)

[Enid Blake]

It is very dark... I like how you've described 'silence' throughout this poem :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Raven, I"ve stated before and I shall repeat, you take the darkest of dark and bring light to it, I believe it aides in our witnessing of what fatality can bring, giving a change to change course, if we feel the darkness there's always a chance to renew and fall into the light. I love your creative mind. Excellent. A most brilliant and clever structure as well. Hugs

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

This is intense, personifies intensity, i can feel hearbeat of the narrator....
great poetry !!!

[judith106]

So dark, which I love...keep writing