Raven Demon

Seraph,

weep for this ghastly error

as I remain the disaster in every heart

And so I will wither

 like the acidic memory I am

Demon,

Pour death’s magic elixir

Into the nectar

of my malfunction

Reviews

[Ruth]

A really powerful blend of survival against the dark and light here. I really felt this, amazing imagery, as always and wrenches the intrigue from under its rock...you never fail to impress me :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great vocab that elicits great imagery to the reader....

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Great word play. Strong, flawless piece. Nicely done!

[J. A. Benton]

thought this was very good

[Becky C Strukamp]

My mind body and soul breathe deeply when I read your writings. You are able to elicit immediate emotions. Well done Raven. Very well done!

[Infinite hexes]

I like your words, this is a very creative write. And its both sad and dark. Though do explain me the title. :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

the references to the Seraphs was a nice and original touch

[mark slade]

as always, great nectar of poetry. No malfunction in your writing.

Oooh this is very enchanting dear poetess....
I do love each line of your marvelous mind, and
Vocabulair, I always knew you're one of a kind..


E.L.