infested by deliriums

infested by deliriums

A Poem by Raven Starhawk

Perversity sheds a rancorous tear for witless curiosities…

…as a battered descendant cowers in a trap …

…and rented souls depart for a higher plateau

No more hammering fists or raised intonations

This cadaver is interminably fragmented

This expiring mentality is infested by deliriums

© 2012 Raven Starhawk


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

impressive vocab here!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Too great and powerful for words. (: Fantabulous masterpiece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I see a girl crying out for her tormented soul. She is trapped within her own mind, thinking about the things she's done. Higher beings come from the heavens to aid her but she pushes them away not wanting any help at all. Im in a courtroom where people are hammering fists down in objection for her own crime. She looks up smiling at them not knowing why for she too is in pieces neither the audience knows why. We end with her alone back in her room where her mentality has gone down to nothingness. Very well written as always.

-Writer *78*

Posted 12 Years Ago


As always, great writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

329 Views
4 Reviews
Rating
Added on November 16, 2012
Last Updated on November 16, 2012
Tags: angst, drama, death, sad, depression, melancholy, abuse, neglect, pain, misery, suicide, abandoned, alone, poem, poetry


Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Reminders Reminders

A Poem by Faffy


Perfection Perfection

A Poem by Faffy