Cyber Stalker

Midnight’s dismal smoke interlaced about me

Discarded and somnolent I linger along a beaten path

As I listen to a spiteful connoisseur

Whose annotations are a haunted whine

And enthralling my reservations like a felony

She materializes to embezzle my song

In her haughtiness she advocates how I am erroneous

Mistaken about what though?  I dare query

My question’s retort was an arduous chore

For words stuck in her throat like rotted meat

And I realized compassion was her enigma

As her individual was a contaminated filament

While she stalks in world of cyber

Author's Note

Have mercy with this. I wrote it when I was very tired and worn out physically, mentally and emotionally. UPDATE: I have edited it a little bit, but realize it needs more work. Thanks to everyone who has read and commented! I also made it not rhyme so much. XD

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Whether you rhyme or not your work never fails to give the reader a magnificent read. This is wonderful as it is!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Well crafted and it is SO powerful in strength! Great description of bully and cruleity!

[Rob Santana]

I love your vocab,good write.

[caroline]

Cyber stalking! Yes this describes it! Its cowardly.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I like the raw emotions here...great :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Well crafted piece regarding those who seem to have no life but bully others on the web. Nicely done.

[KAREN]

Very well crafted work!

[Richard Lane]

my friend this is a great poem.

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

I think this is really good! It maynot be your best but its good.

[mark slade]

i've read worse. at least you're willing to experiment.