Splitting Skull

Through ceaseless fabrications woven by the hunted
Channels narrow leading to Dante's peak
This cursed soul claws at earth in hope...
...of eluding misery destined upon her...
...as agony whisks through her...
...and rapes her mind with sorrow
A slave to pain, she breathes deep...
...while torture's storm settles throughout her being
And as her skull splits in two...
...she sees the fleeting world...
...through a veil of tears

Author's Note

>.> I base this poem on my shitty headache.

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

LMFAO!!!! Your author's not caught me off guard that s**t is funny. Not your headache,just reading that after reading your what I think is a bad a*s dark writing and than your A.N. You have skills Raven to be able to just right s**t off the top of your head like that. Much respect....aaww s**t my heads hurting now

[Toni Blackerby]

I love this poem its how i feel when i get a bitchen headache

[judith106]

A headache? This poem is great, I thought when reading it was inspired by some kind of relentless inner turmoil. Awesome

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You weaved such a master pieces with a headache being your inspiration!

[KAREN]

This was painful to read! I could feel the agony and sorrow! Nicely penned!

[Becky C Strukamp]

You did a brilliant peace of work born of that headache...everytime I read you ..my hearts beats faster with every word. Brilliant work as always!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You can write anything with intensity... the emotion you evoked within this poem from a headache is amazing!...now my head hurts! lol

Well penned Raven!

[caroline]

hurray! I love your work. Sorry about the headache but love the veil.

[sivan]

the last two lines capture my imagination because i have seen the world through such eyes... hopeless

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

How you describe a headache is simply majestic...brilliance..