Havoc Betrayer

http://www.wattpad.com/user/Raven_Starhawk

Scrolling through the ancient chronicles,

         Unlimited access to black sunshine rue,

      The Cutter surfs channel of Eve

 

But there is no safety in Echo’s Haven

          While death spends time

      In the arms of a stranger

 

Exploration into Drayton Falls

        As a haunted countryside affair decays

       Will chain you in a reserved abyss

Author's Note

Everything in this poem is references to my stories on Wattpad. XD

http://www.wattpad.com/user/Raven_Starhawk

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

whoa...such an adventurous poem indeed!

and the references to the names make this poem sound even more elegant!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Raven, you write I can feel the depth of it's wording! I can tell you put your whole self into it! Excellent as always!

[Rob Santana]

I really love your style of writing.

[sivan]

While death spends time

In the arms of a stranger

I love the detatched and yet atatched tone of these lines... powerful construction

[caroline]

I like this because it talks about the darkness that we all can fall in.

[Becky C Strukamp]

The darkness in this poem is protrayed most excellent. You manage to take darkness and shed light upon it with a new vision. Excellent write.

[reflectingus]

Damn. This is so powerful, so dark. Your poetry always manages to shock, and that's why I love it.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great work as usual...top class :D

[Lily Mae]

That just took me on a journey..and then some.. most excellent imagery..xo